Last Doctor's Appointment
Final date have I with Doctor DeathScheduled by ever Righteous StateEscorted am I by glorified thugsEnter I into antiseptic killing chamberAscend I gurney, opening its arms,Strappedly sewing my last...
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The language structure of this poem was uniquein that it resonated a different time, differentplace, using current atrocity metaphors as its strength.As a reader, my mind shot out in many...
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I had to come back and read this, and compared to some of your other work, and I thinmk I'm starting to understand your style somewhat, which was does give a differnt impression upon re-read.
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Powerful indeed. Refreshingly interesting wonderful different style. Real feel here. I haven't heard of guerny before, looked it up but still no wiser.
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Michael a powerful and quite stunning poem, I just wonder what got him there!!!!!!!!
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What i've enjoyed most so far of the work i've read with you is the sound. There is musical, rythmical purpose in the placement of words and it is quite good.i got the idea of this as a thoughts...
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Hi Micheal-I will have to say this is interesting.My nit is that I didn't feel for the speaker even ashe is on his way to his death.The poem has a cold feel to it.Perhaps that was your...
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Pete,I deal with dyslexia. It is so frustrating and daunting at times. I thank you for showing my mispell. I will enter an edit. Thanks, my friend.Michael Chellew
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Bluezoe,State sanctioned murder I did not intend to be implicitly coupled with euthanasia, just only a court mandated execution. Maybe I was a bit vague. You were not at all the way off. Your crit...
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Yoly,Thanks for your reading and consideration. My first part was intended to be clinical sans emotion as executions by lethal injection by nature are."Ascend I gurney, opening its arms,Strappedly...
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Quote:I deal with dyslexia. It is so frustrating and daunting at times.Yo're not alone in that aspect, brother.... try throwing bad eyesight into the mix, and always sitting in the dark while typping,...
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I don't know if it is mis spelled or not, it was just I hadn't heard of the word Guerney, but funnily enough heard the word used in a film on telly last night.
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Pete,On the telly was it a film about a guernsey cow in the Channel Islands? Just kidding, mate.Pete, I did make an edit after your first response on my dyslexic spelling of gurney. I better say...
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Hi Michael, this piece brought to mind, one 'Timothy McVeigh' not that I thought this piece was about him but someone in a similar situation, I like what you say and am not far behind you in your...
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